Mama-Mia - Proud Mommy to the Cub and Bub: 55-er or something like that

Tuesday, January 21, 2014

There had been silence in the room since he had accused her of infidelity. Of cheating him and their love.

He had ranted, raved and pointed fingers while all she kept saying was ‘But I am telling you the truth, there IS no other man!’

Just as he was leaving she whispered, ‘It’s another woman.’

The previous one is here!

Uma said...: Oh wow! lovely twist..very nice, Abha :-); January 21, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Anonymous said...: Liked this one better than the first one.. Try more.. You can master it.. Even I am trying it out..; January 21, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Unknown said...: Woww... beautifully put :D; January 21, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Shailaja V said...: Brilliant twist!; January 21, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Pushpz said...: that was lovely :); January 21, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Aparna said...: Good one Abha :) ! Coming from someone who refuses as much as possible to attempt fiction ;).; January 21, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Obsessivemom said...: That was brilliantly done. The surprise last line.. wonderful!; January 21, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Anonymous said...: what a twist I say; January 21, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Anonymous said...: Aha, super twist!; January 21, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Mama - Mia said...: thank you so much laydeez! am so thrillllled! :D

and Aparna - I never ever write fiction! This is the first time! :D; January 21, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Anonymous said...: Wow! Loved this, from a previous challenge I see. Lovely!! ~ Simran; July 2, 2014 at 12:44 PM