Wednesday, January 22, 2014

55-er or something like that - 3


They had been dating for a while but still hadn't stolen their first kiss. She realized that if she waited for the shy guy, she may have to wait forever.
                                                                        
“Shall we kiss?” was her ultimate hormonal proposition. They did and it was all teeth and noses!


The tender kiss will have to wait. Sigh!



Ps: I never realized that there might be people out there who don't know what a 55er is! Yes, I can be thick like that. In a nutshell, it is a work of fiction done in no more or no less than 55 words. Fun! For this week we are using prompt words. The first one was love, the second just as I was leaving and today's is 'tender kiss.'


If you want to know more, here's a link!


10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Teeth & noses! :D

Nice one again, Abha!

Obsessivemom said...

This just too cute!! Teeth .. yikes!

Anonymous said...

that awkward first cute, so cute :D

Shailaja V said...

Teeth? Now I'm trying to remember mine ;) Good one, Abha :)

Pushpz said...

haha..nose always comes in the way :)

Unknown said...

Hahahaha such is the hormonal kiss :P

Subha said...

How is this? My first attempt:
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To do or Not? To do or Not? She was in a dilemma, confusion and frustration....
What will my parents think? What will my in laws think? what will my husband think?
How will he manage without it?

Suddenly something strike her "Ok done I am doing this for my kids. No one can stop me!!"

And she resigned from her job to become a Stay-At-Home-Mother :-)


Uma said...

lovely capture of the first kiss..:-)

Mama - Mia said...

Thank you thank you! am having so much fun! :)

and very cool, coolgalsubha! :)

and did you remember yours, Shailaja?! :p were there teeth involved?

Pallavi - you get it girl! first hormonal kisses! :p

Prats said...

Hahha... The travails of a person who hasn't been kissed.